Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
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Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
Hi/ salut XD
bah je sais pas
am lazy enough to write
bah je sais pas
am lazy enough to write
Anime : Alot check the video ina kross to learn more ( va voir la video a akross.ru pour les details )
Music : Eden - Man Down
Sofwares: After effects
DL: soon
Music : Eden - Man Down
Sofwares: After effects
DL: soon
ZOD#- V.I.P
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Date d'inscription : 24/01/2016
Age : 31
Re: Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
I comm in youtube
KATSUKI- V.I.P
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Date d'inscription : 09/05/2015
Age : 28
Re: Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
C'est better si tu la fait en leur website + je sais pas le site des russe et chiers XDKΔTSUKI a écrit:I comm in youtube
ZOD#- V.I.P
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Date d'inscription : 24/01/2016
Age : 31
Re: Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
Je t'avais déjà dis ce qui me dérangeais ^^.
En tout cas y a un bon flow dans ce clip, bien joué
En tout cas y a un bon flow dans ce clip, bien joué
Re: Woe Admonition |AkrossCon 2k15
yo. Overall you make nice ambience betwin visual and audio choice.
But you make lot of little mistake, not very bog mistake but one by one that can change a great amv into a medium one haha
I see lot of fade and just after you do a cut (exemple at 18sec) and that not smooth , maybe if the song have particular beat you sould do that but i didn't heard thing thing match up with this strange fade/cut.
The akross text at 39Sec was realy cool but it too contrasted we can read it properly, that kill all the text detail and make everything black or too dark. If you have put more detail on the BG maybe that could be good, idk.
I realy like the text at 1:04 ;p
The comp at 1:10 with the title and the brain have the same "contrast" than the akross title at 39sec. I think like the akross title, you sould have put more detail and do something too mix the brain and the gears behind it.
Juste after that the song start and the rythme don't change, when the music changes rhythm the editing must also change rhythm and choice of sync.
All the little text you ad everywhere (1:12 or 1:14) was too simple i think, and was ussless, we can't read it ,no time too do it so just do more simple thing or just don't put text (or just "artistik" text haha).
The sync and scene selection (since 1:11) was quite random, some scene doesn't work very well together. But you also have some werid transition very rough transition (like at 1:23).
1:45, nice bird.
The end (2:13 too 2:26) was realy good, nice lips sync. But wtf is this outro aparition haha
So overall all this thing are normaly easy too correct with betatesting i think so see you for your next amv haha
But you make lot of little mistake, not very bog mistake but one by one that can change a great amv into a medium one haha
I see lot of fade and just after you do a cut (exemple at 18sec) and that not smooth , maybe if the song have particular beat you sould do that but i didn't heard thing thing match up with this strange fade/cut.
The akross text at 39Sec was realy cool but it too contrasted we can read it properly, that kill all the text detail and make everything black or too dark. If you have put more detail on the BG maybe that could be good, idk.
I realy like the text at 1:04 ;p
The comp at 1:10 with the title and the brain have the same "contrast" than the akross title at 39sec. I think like the akross title, you sould have put more detail and do something too mix the brain and the gears behind it.
Juste after that the song start and the rythme don't change, when the music changes rhythm the editing must also change rhythm and choice of sync.
All the little text you ad everywhere (1:12 or 1:14) was too simple i think, and was ussless, we can't read it ,no time too do it so just do more simple thing or just don't put text (or just "artistik" text haha).
The sync and scene selection (since 1:11) was quite random, some scene doesn't work very well together. But you also have some werid transition very rough transition (like at 1:23).
1:45, nice bird.
The end (2:13 too 2:26) was realy good, nice lips sync. But wtf is this outro aparition haha
So overall all this thing are normaly easy too correct with betatesting i think so see you for your next amv haha
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