Ergo Proxy: Si(G)Ns of an Angel

Not bad.

I found it a bit long because your editing is pretty linear. You could shorten the music and offer more variation in your editing by taking risks.

By cons, your zooms are approximate times. Apply yourself better next time.

Good luck.

Hello there Irany Thanks a lot for watching my video and taking the time to leave your feedback! I really appreciate it!

Irany a écrit:I found it a bit long because your editing is pretty linear. You could shorten the music and offer more variation in your editing by taking risks.

Yes this makes a lot of sense coming from a spectacular creator of effects.
Most of my focus was on the story here so I needed the song duration to present the whole thing, but yes I will definitely take your advice and try to provide some variety (and improved editing) if it'll create a prettier video that way.
Thanks again!

I agree with Irany, the editing was kind of linear; even when the music changes there is not so much variation in the editing itself.
Apart from that, the story was clear I think, and it was a nice vid overall. Good luck for the IC

Yup, multiple folks are agreeing on this thought so I should probably be more careful from now on. Thanks for your feedback and your comment Satsumayu