[Level Up 2016] - Ojo No Ansatsu

DigiCyber (Novice): Well, regardless of how hard it was to make this clip i'm still pretty glad & satisfied with the progress that i made , working with Noor on this clip was an incredible experience for me since i learned a lot of things about how to make a clear story & to improve more with my editing itself , as improving more with the basics most of all as well as the technical part as well , i wish if i had a bit more time to fix couple of things but it was a great experience for me to do this with such an incredible pro as Noor , i hope ye'll enjoy & understand this clip regardless of some probs that i had ^^

Noormuda (Pro): Being a pro isn't as easy as I thought it would be haha. but I had a great experience teaching Digi how to execute his thoughts through editing and what he needs to achieve that. but starting with an editor that is still new to the editing world was quite a challenge I have to admit, but seeing how digi was when he first started his project and now after he finished it makes me proud because there was a huge difference how he used to edit months ago and how he edits now. Digi had the motivation to change and prove it to everyone and I think his final product is great. I do think he leveled up during this project and I believe he will keep on leveling up until he reaches what he wants.

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Аниме: Akatsuki no Yona, Gintama, Sword of the Stranger, Akame Ga Kill, Nurarihyon no Mago, Mushishi, Fate Zero, Shingeki no Kyojin, Tasogare Otome x Amnesia, Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, Sword Art Online, Ao no Exorcist, Kara no Kyoukai, Aldnoah Zero
Музыка: Broken Iris - A New Hope, Fanu - The Unseen
DDL : http://amvnews.ru/index.php?go=Files&in=view&id=8049

cool but it's not my style

the clip is good nontheless, you leveled up a lot, i seriously dont like the flow of the story since its really bad in a story you showcase the characters at the begining mostly (especially when the crossover character is obviously of a big importance in your story) , also it has some flaws here and there some masks are not fitting the scenes and i am not a huge fan of the black lines extending to full sscreen , good luck at the contest

Hoshirogi a écrit:the clip is good nontheless, you leveled up a lot, i seriously dont like the flow of the story since its really bad in a story you showcase the characters at the begining mostly (especially when the crossover character is obviously of a big importance in your story) , also it has some flaws here and there some masks are not fitting the scenes and i am not a huge fan of the black lines extending to full sscreen , good luck at the contest

come again ??
i am definitely sure that this is just a biased judgement i daresay
the storyline was perfectly focusing on 3 characters , the story was passing by obvious & clear phases , & now a biased judge come & say such thing , rofl
u really better learn to be a fair judge instead of a biased one who just try to find an excuse to shut the others

DigiCyber a écrit:

Hoshirogi a écrit:the clip is good nontheless, you leveled up a lot, i seriously dont like the flow of the story since its really bad in a story you showcase the characters at the begining mostly (especially when the crossover character is obviously of a big importance in your story) , also it has some flaws here and there some masks are not fitting the scenes and i am not a huge fan of the black lines extending to full sscreen , good luck at the contest

come again ??
i am definitely sure that this is just a biased judgement i daresay
the storyline was perfectly focusing on 3 characters , the story was passing by obvious & clear phases , & now a biased judge come & say such thing , rofl
u really better learn to be a fair judge instead of a biased one who just try to find an excuse to shut the others

how am i considered biased?LOL
I Clearly stated my opinion about your clip dude, and what to improve on it ,the storyline is far from perfect for ME , if you disagree you have your opinion

Hoshirogi a écrit:
how am i considered biased?LOL
I Clearly stated my opinion about your clip dude, and what to improve on it ,the storyline is far from perfect for ME , if you disagree you have your opinion

Hoshirogi a écrit:i seriously dont like the flow of the story

ahem ...............
check yer comments on some other entries on amvnews , u didn't even gave any previews , u typed as well on a certain clip this line
"Having followed the project a bit on the end i have to say i am proud of your hard work and actually having finish you know my opinion about the vid , great level up  "
& u dare to tell me that u're not biased , watch yerself first

DigiCyber a écrit:

Hoshirogi a écrit:
how am i considered biased?LOL
I Clearly stated my opinion about your clip dude, and what to improve on it ,the storyline is far from perfect for ME , if you disagree you have your opinion

Hoshirogi a écrit:i seriously dont like the flow of the story

ahem ...............
check yer comments on some other entries on amvnews , u didn't even gave any previews , u typed as well on a certain clip this line
"Having followed the project a bit on the end i have to say i am proud of your hard work and actually having finish you know my opinion about the vid , great level up  "
& u dare to tell me that u're not biased , watch yerself first

having followed means i told her flaws in pm you posted your video here for peopl to comment on it , if you didnt do it for that reason i am sorry but you are wrong , also you can see that i commented n almost everyone and said mostly flaws so your case is still irellevant stop being ssalty

i'm not salty
& besides doing something in PM isn't the same as doing it in public , watch yerself again , & don't even dare to tell me what to do again
we're not comrades as how we used to be so mind yer business already

DigiCyber a écrit:i'm not salty
& besides doing something in PM isn't the same as doing it in public , watch yerself again , & don't even dare to tell me what to do again
we're not comrades as how we used to be so mind yer business already

i clearly didnt tell you what to do lol ,i critisized your clip because you posted in the forum if you want to follow my advices its up to you lol, and i did it in pm because i am close in the person ,i do mind my business i like this forum so i post on it so its my businesss sort of lol

Hoshirogi a écrit:

DigiCyber a écrit:i'm not salty
& besides doing something in PM isn't the same as doing it in public , watch yerself again , & don't even dare to tell me what to do again
we're not comrades as how we used to be so mind yer business already

i clearly didnt tell you what to do lol ,i critisized your clip because you posted in the forum if you want to follow my advices its up to you lol, and i did it in pm because i am close in the person ,i do mind my business i like this forum so i post on it so its my businesss sort of lol

as if i asked for yer opinion anyway
keep it for yerself

DigiCyber a écrit:

Hoshirogi a écrit:

DigiCyber a écrit:i'm not salty
& besides doing something in PM isn't the same as doing it in public , watch yerself again , & don't even dare to tell me what to do again
we're not comrades as how we used to be so mind yer business already

i clearly didnt tell you what to do lol ,i critisized your clip because you posted in the forum if you want to follow my advices its up to you lol, and i did it in pm because i am close in the person ,i do mind my business i like this forum so i post on it so its my businesss sort of lol

as if i asked for yer opinion anyway
keep it for yerself

you post it in the particular forum for people to say their thoughts no? LOL because thats what this forum is

Hoshirogi a écrit:

DigiCyber a écrit:

Hoshirogi a écrit:

DigiCyber a écrit:i'm not salty
& besides doing something in PM isn't the same as doing it in public , watch yerself again , & don't even dare to tell me what to do again
we're not comrades as how we used to be so mind yer business already

i clearly didnt tell you what to do lol ,i critisized your clip because you posted in the forum if you want to follow my advices its up to you lol, and i did it in pm because i am close in the person ,i do mind my business i like this forum so i post on it so its my businesss sort of lol

as if i asked for yer opinion anyway
keep it for yerself

you post it in the particular forum for people to say their thoughts no? LOL because thats what this forum is

i am talking about yer respond personally , i won't mind anyone else but urs , now , go to sleep & don't waste my time

If you post on a amv forum, then you have to be ready to get a comment from anyone. It's quite sad how you react toward his comment. It's your choice to accept it or not but I believe you should not react like this when he was being polite.

Now about your video :
I agree the black lines here are kinda useless and I'm confused about the purpose of the crossover ( I think it was not necessary to use the guy from Gintama and instead only focus with Akatsuki no Yona with the blonde guy ). You improved a lot especially your flow! I think your video is one of the best in the contest, good luck

IT'S SHIT    (definitely not just cuz u didn't use my poster (jk it was cool. gg))

Nice nice i really like it but shame on you for your reaction toward Hoshirogi, SHAME!
Good luck for ranking my friend!